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_The_Gryffindor_Heiress_ Poetry Corner (Poem's Updated Title: 'To The New You')

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'To The New You'

I want to go back,
To the eyes that doesn't lie,
To the eyes that isn't always sad,
To the eye’s that doesn’t always weep,
To the eyes that makes me smile,
To the eyes that doesn't always hold that empty gaze,
To the eyes that isn't always hurt,
To the eyes that holds a special meaning in my heart,

I want to see again,
The smiles that you share with me,
The laughs that rings in my ears,
The hugs that made me feel warm,
The comfort you share,
The voice that gives shivers through my body,
Comforting me in ways I didn't know could be,
But you've change,
And for me that change,
Isn't for the better,
You've change so much,

I don't know you anymore,
You're not who you used to be,
You became silent and unresponsive,
In every way I touch you,
You wouldn't respond,
I'm crying and hurting,
For the used-to-be's,
For the new you,
'Cause I know I can never go back,
To the eyes,
To the smiles,
To the laughs,
And to the hugs and comforts,
Because now that you've change,
You don't know me anymore.


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This poem here is something I just randomly made one afternoon. I do hope you would be reading and commenting the poems that I shall be posting in this threadie. So, *~•♥The Gryffindor Heiress♥•~* is going idle, to wait for your comments!

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Nice Poem Mara, I like it  Wink The Eyes
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Nice poem Mara  Wink
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♥You are my everything….♥

Thanks so much for the comments guys! xD Sorry if I haven't posting much of my poems here since all my poems are in Philippines. And I haven't had time to send it through e-mail.. *sighs* I know it should have been 'To The Eyes' or 'The Eyes' but I what I was really describing is the new him...  Smite Thanks so much talaga!

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Thankies Kai for the awesome siggie and avvie!! I lurve it!

*◘♥Draco's Angel♥◘*

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'I just wanted to relive the past and make everything right again... Starting with the day I fell in-love with you...'
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