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"Spanichens of the Moon"




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keizhee and rui

keizhee and zick

keizhee and zick

keizhee

keizhee

zick

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rui

rui

rui

coryn

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"spanichens of the moon"

keizhee and rui

the past



hey guys...

i found a video that would a bit

serve as a spoiler for my story or maybe

just a trailer.
(coz it's a lot like my story pwera yung

sobrang fight scenes sa mga gyera...)

haha...

hope you'll like it.

from youtube.


"Yesterday I loved him
Today I suffer
Tomorrow I'll die
Thinking he's still mine."

Characters:

keizhee sung-yuen
the moon looks so perfect
in the night sky...
but it can never be mine...


ezekiel marquez

i guess i'll never get to call you mine
but remember i'm always by your side...

coryn yuen
someday you'll see that
life never ends till the day
you decided to set him free...

 
jake rui (ruwi)
i'm willing to let go,
if that would make you smile...

"the truth is, everyone's going to hurt you no matter what you do, no matter how good you are. it's just that, it is your own decision who's that person worth the pain you feel..."

Intro:

he's walking away...

i don't know what to do...

if i don't say anything now...

i'd be losing him...


one...

two...

three...


"iste imo, rui! iste imo!"

he turned back!

he smiled...

but then...


"rui! no!"

NO!

keizhee, wake up!

a tear fell from my eyes...

"rui...iste...imo"


notes:
this story is based on a true to life one though some chapters may contain added facts but the whole of it is true.

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Whoa! I never knew this story was a REAL LIFE STORY!
Haha. Really? Is that true?  Peace

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yep. an account of my life.

hahaha.

kinda funny im haring it out here.

hahaha...

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Okay. That seems nice. Haha. So you're Tifa?! So who's Cloud?

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chapter 1: Memories


"what happened, dear? why were you shouting?"


tita was all worried...
hindi ko alam kung bakit napapanaginipan ko na naman sya?...
i want an answer to all my questions...


"i dreamed of rui, tita...that night when i thought i'd lose him.."

i can't stop the tears from falling...

"dear, that was three years ago. ayos na si rui kaya you don't have to worry much about him. sie kien (calm down), iha."

alam kong ayos na sya...
pero the thought na napahamak sya because of me comes back...
like a NIGHTMARE...


"rui..."

i went out my room, umakyat ako sa attic.
ito lang kasi yung place kung san natatakimik ako...
but then...
this night iba yung nararamdaman ko...

his voice...
his laughter...
his memories...
they're all in my head...




(flashback)


"kapag nalulungkot ka, hanapin mo yung pinakamataas na lugar kung san kaya mong abutin ang buwan. tapos humiling ka na sana mawala na lahat ng lungkot mo..."

he's smiling then...

"talaga? pero imposible naman yun. pano naman matatanggal ng buwan lahat ng nararamdaman kong kalungkutan? ang layo layo kaya nya..."

natahimik sya...
he looked at me...
then he smiled and held my hand...
tapos tinapat nya yung
kamay ko sa buwan na parang hawak ko yon...
i can see the moon in
my hands...

"hindi naman ah. ayan oh, hawak mo na."

he smiled again

that smile...
i long to see them soon...


"rui, sana bumalik ka na. iste imo."

the lonely night made me feel more pain.
bakit ko nga ba sya iniwan?
bakit ba ko natakot?
mas nakabuti nga kaya yung desisyon ko na iwan sya?
tama bang sumuko ako?
tama bang pumayag ako sa gusto nila?
ako yung sumira sa pangako...

a tear fell

ako yung dapat sisihin...
ako yung walang ginawa...
ako yung nagpatalo...
bakit wala akong ginawa?













naging mahina ba ako?

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a classmate.

haha.

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Cool! You;re going great! Haha.

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thanks!

trying to post more.

haha.

hope i can reach the posts through my threads.
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Cool. Anyway, more luk to your story!

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yeah, more luck to me.

haaay.

at least this clicks in WITCH.

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Yeah! Haha. Its still nice, though.

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well,

anyways.

itutuloy ko na lang whatever happens.

haha.

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Chapter 2: Jake Rui

"naging mahina ba 'ko, rui?"

humiga ako sa floor...
then i hit my head on something, it was my treasure chest. i opened it and i saw my diary, the diary rui gave me...

"i will not always be by your side pero kapag may nang-away sa'yo isulat mo lang dyan at pag nagkita tayo bubugbugin ko sila...promise yan!"

"panu mo kaya gagawin yun eh white belter ka pa lang!?" i laughed

"aba! kapag ikaw na sinaktan nila, gagaling ako!" he posed liked he's !@#$

"dapat pala lagi akong inaaway para gumaling ka!"

those memories...
it made me cry more thinking
na wala na sya dito sa tabi ko...


i opened my diary...

Dear jake,

Jake Rui...
sino ka nga ba sa buhay ko?
ikaw yung batang nakilala ko
four years ago...
bale kung icocompute,
grade 3 palang
ako nung mameet kita.


tama! i was 8 years old by then.
anong magagawa nila,
advance ako eh.

it was autumn right? dad brought me to vienna, austria and there i met you. our parents are close friends pero nahirapan tayo maging close kasi...


"hi, i'm keizhee sung-yuen. nice to meet you..."

"he...he...he...hell...hello."

i giggled...

"what's the laugh for!?"

"mooommmmyyyy!!! this boy's been shouting at me!"

there was fear in his eyes the moment his dad stood up and head towards us...

kasi nga tumakbo ka palayo, diba?
takot ka pala sa daddy mo, bigla ko naisip...
so when they asked me what happened i said i was joking...

i went outside and saw you crying...
i felt guilty...


"i'm sorry..."

i was shocked. is this boy really saying sorry to me? "i'm sorry too. it was all my fault..." well, i really mean it...

"inamin mo rin! galit na ko sayo! hindi na kita kakausapin kahit kelan!"

ano daw! di ba kanina lang eh nagsosorry sya? tapos ngayon sinisigawan na nya uli ako! ang gulo nito! "kala ko ba ayos na tayo?"

"hinde! never ever! pinapahamak mo ko! get out of my way, i'm leaving!"

tama. ang suplado mo pa nun. ang tagal mo ding hindi nagpakita sa kin. halos winter na nung makita uli kita...

"hoi!"

"akala ko ba hindi mo na ko kakausapin uli?"

"so?! sabi ni papa isama muna daw kita sa ice park, kasama natin si yaya."

"talaga? isasama mo ko? bait (term for bati) na tayo?"

"hindi pa. sabi ko never ever di ba? tara na"

Yeah. that day na muntik mo na ko patayin...haha...that day ko rin nalaman na mabait ka pala...na you do care about me...

"yaya! bili mo kami ice pop!"

"are you out of your mind? where can she find such?! wala magtitinda nun! winter kaya!"

"wala ka pakealam! yaya! wag ka babalik ng wala nun!"

umalis si yaya nun, at siguro dahil wala naman talaga eh natagalan sya...it's getting dark tapos closing na nung park kaya pinalabas na tayo at dun na lang daw maghintay...

"tagal ni yaya. dun muna tayo. turuan kita skating! dali!"

"ayoko! iba na lang..."

"what do you say? hide and seek na lang!"

"magsisisi ka! you won't find me! ako yata ang champion sa Pinas ng larong yan! madilim pa kaya talo ka na! ako muna tatago ha! bilang na!"

"wag ka nga mayabang! tago na! one...two... three...four..."

silence...

"game na!? eleven...twenty! tagal naman oh..."

a minute more...

"what are you doing here? your nanny is looking for you."

"officer, we were jus playing."

"you better go home. i'll call the office to inform your nanny bout you, wait here..."

"yes officer!...keizhee! get out in there! uwi na tayo!"

silence...

a deafening silence...

"keizhee!!! iiwan na kita! i'm not joking!!!..."

no answer...

























"KEIZHEE!!!..."


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hi ate.!
hindi ko pa alam..
na mayroon ka palang story..
update soon po! Wink Peace

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Nice story Kym Smiley
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hi ate.!
hindi ko pa alam..
na mayroon ka palang story..
update soon po! Wink Peace

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sistereth!

la lang.

pinost ko lang dito.

haha.

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Nice story Kym Smiley
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Chapter 3: Tears

Keizhee's POV:

"one...two...three...four...five..."

ngayon na ang chance ko para makalayo...each step i take he's voice gets farther and farther...ito ang gusto ko, makalayo, makalaya...

"just a few more steps... i'll be sa..."

wha...what's this i feel? it's getting colder. i can't move. my hands are getting numb. i want to go but i cant even make a single step...

"keizhee!!!iiwan na kita! i'm not joking!!!..."

i heard his voice...
ayokong makita nya ko...
kasi he'll bring me back to my prison...
i can't move...
i closed my eyes...

there was darkness...


"KEIZHEE!"

Rui's POV:

she's not responding...
maybe i must go look for her...


my heart is pounding. natatakot na ko.

"Keizhee! ano ba!?"

i have to find her...

i searched the place...

"it's getting cold. the officer might be looking for me now...i must get back." pero pano sya? anong gagawin ko? i must find he...HER!

i saw someone, "Keizhee!"

i ran to her. she was cold. ano gagawin ko, i thought to myself. i must make an action. i tried to wake her up baka nakatulog lang, but in this cold night?! aAah! i pulled her out and tried to carry her...pero hindi ko sya kaya... i tried again and some sort of adrenaline siguro i made it...tinakbo ko pabalik sa main office and then i saw someone...

"dad..."

dad and the officer ran towards us...
hindi ko na alam yung sunod na nangyari...
all i know was keizhee was at my back and dad was askin me something pero di ko naiintindihan...i'm so exhausted...there was...darkness...

Keizhee's POV:

where am i?

"mom?"

"yes, dear? are you fine? is there anything that hurts? do you want anything? "

i smiled...
it was the first time i saw mom worry about me. i thought all she thinks about was work...
i didn't answer...

"how did i get here mom?"

"uncle john brought you here with jake..."

"rui? what was he doing with me?"

"uncle john said that you were carried by jake all the way to the main office.."

"he did?"

is that true?
no it cant be...
he would have left me there
if he wanted...

"i want to see him mom,  please bring me to him... i'm already
fine."


"ok, dear. if that's what you want"

two nurses assisted me and mom led the way...

"we're here..."

"mom, let's stay here first. i think i heard uncle john inside.."

was he scolding rui for what happened?

"you're the guy so you are supposed to look after her! do you know what you did!" his dad's voice seem so angry.

"rui" i whispered

" we were just playi..."

"PLAYING!? so you call that a game! you risked her life! what game is that!"

i felt tears in my eyes, "mom, please bring me in..."

mom seems to hesitate but still knocked on th door. Uncle opened it for us and i saw rui, he was not crying- not even a single tear can be seen in his eyes. he looks so dignified and i'm not expecting that.

"uncle john...rui has..."

he looked at me...
like he doesn't want me to continue what i'm goin to say...

"he has nothing to do with what happened!" i blurted out.

he's look didn't ceased...

"it was all my fault. i was the one who invited him to play, i forced him. and he saved me, remember? so please don't scold him..." i felt tears in my eyes...

there's a knock on the door...

"mr. Rui, there's a call for you in the phone. mrs. yuen, the bill is set."

"we're coming. (turns to me) i understand, keizhee"

they both went out. we were left there...i was expecting him to blame me again because i placed him in danger...

"why did you do that?''

i dont know what to tell him...
tears continue to roll down my cheeks...
he stood in front of me...

"stop crying...dad might see you...please"

he was not even looking at me...
still i cant stop crying...
then all of a sudden...
i stood up, i hugged him...

"thank you because you didn't left me behind. i know you could have just left me there. yes, you're dad might have punished you but  your headache will be gone. yet you chose your headache and your dad still scolded you.you didn't even defended yourself...why didn't you just lie and tell him i ran away and you followed me or you saved me from a polar bear? why did you just stand there and let him scold you. it wasn't your fault...i'm sorry..."

i was cryin like a child then, yes i'm still achild but the way i cry was not fitted on my age. hello, i was 8. i cried and cried until he hugged me back and said...





































"sorry. that's me."
then i heard him cry...

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Great story, and nice touch with those color codings! Wink
So, hmm... Any hints for the upcoming plot?
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Maybe the only reason why people hang on to memories so tightly, is because memories are
the only things that stay the same. Even when everything else changes.
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